Ever wondered how to 'seal the deal' with your online prospects? User statistics and online behaviour studies show it's all in what you say and how you say it. That's because, in the online environment:
Web copy is possibly the most challenging but equally the most rewarding form of communication: make an instant connection and you get a direct response; overstate your point and your visitors will run a mile.
Web copy should enhance scannability and credibility. Here's how:
Everyone seems to have the attention span of a goldfish these days, so instead of reading word by word we scan for snippets that will give us the gist of what's being said.
Usability guru, Jacob Nielsen, tells us that users' eyes follow a distinctive "F" pattern when they scan a webpage. This means they sweep across and down the page just a couple of times before their gaze shifts elsewhere.
When your visitors view a webpage, unless something jumps off the screen at them, all they see is a stream of words too long to mentally string together. So stop wandering eyes by giving them something to focus on:
Links enhance credibility, suggest you have done your research and imply there is accuracy and wider relevance to your claims.
Long, tangled, descriptive sentences are a waste of space. Users want punchy statements that are stripped down to the bare essentials.
A recent eyetracking study found that short blurbs increased the amount of time readers spent on an average page by 33%. These summaries also increased the likelihood of users scrolling down the page.